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		<title>Interactive Writing Puts the Punchline First</title>
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		<dc:creator>Thom Schoenborn</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Writing for the web is no joke, because online copywriting always puts the punchline first. Think about the order with which you tell a joke: first you tell a little anecdote, then BOOM! Punchline. Writing for the web, however, requires you to put the punchline in a headline, in the first sentence, and in the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Writing for the web is no joke, because online copywriting always puts the punchline first. Think about the order with which you tell a joke: first you tell a little anecdote, then BOOM! Punchline. Writing for the web, however, requires you to put the punchline in a headline, in the first sentence, and in the first paragraph.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s why: Putting that point of view and main message right at the top of a web page allows your reader to quickly decide if the information you&#8217;re providing is the information they want. If it is, they read on. If it&#8217;s not, you haven&#8217;t wasted their time.<span id="more-3"></span></p>
<p>This concept isn&#8217;t really new, but it was driven home to me during a two-day course on <a href="http://www.bluedragoncommunications.com">presentation and public speaking</a> skills. Putting your point of view and punchline first was one of several skills that overlap between online copywriting and public speaking.</p>
<p>During the seminar from <a href="http://www.bluedragoncommunications.com">Blue Dragon Communications</a>, we practiced again and again stating our point of view right off the bat. &#8220;Point of view, action requested, benefit of the action,&#8221; coach <a href="http://www.bluedragoncommunications.com/who/denise-harrington">Denise Harrington</a> would remind us. Again and again.</p>
<p>When it comes to applying this to online text, copywriters need to remember this sequence because they&#8217;re  typically funny people. It&#8217;s usually the copywriter who&#8217;s loudly telling a <a href="http://www.overexplainedjokes.com">joke</a> in the office. It&#8217;s usually the writer who&#8217;s got the amazing story that keeps the clients and co-workers in stitches.</p>
<p>And that&#8217;s part of their job. A quiet copywriter is a writer who isn&#8217;t testing his ideas, constructions, and interpretations out in the real world.</p>
<p>But when it comes to putting that information online, the punchline and the point must lead. Putting the core of your message first is almost never the way you&#8217;d speak casually. But if you&#8217;re presenting publicly or writing for the web, you should.</p>
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